I haven't written a song in here for quite some time.  But I got some good songs in the last.. oh 7 months.  haha here's one.  I cant decide on a title, I have it narrowed down to Three.  Which one do you like better?

"The Struggle"  or  "Blinded"  or  "Crippled"
©by: Jason Miller

Blinded now I cannot see
You take my sight away from me
On the floor is where I bleed
You take away my energy

So say goodbye this final time
As you walk away I'll walk the line
I'll walk the line

I just don't understand
Where's my helping hand?
Because I've been crippled far too long
I just don't understand
Why you reprimand
When you know that you're wrong

I can't hear a word you say
I really wish you'd walk away
Always wishing for a brighter day
Why must I always feel this way
Feeling dead as dead can be
You took my life away from me

So say goodbye this final time
As you walk away I'll walk the line
I'll walk the line

I just don't understand
Where's my helping hand?
Because I've been crippled far too long
I just don't understand
Why you reprimand
When you know that you're wrong

Not even going to ask for feedback.. no one checks here anymore because I was lazy and didnt update in over 7 months.  But if you do read this, please give feedback.  Ok I lied.

This song was written a while ago, but it's been tweaked because of a lot of stress I've been going through recently.

"Hatred"
© by Jason Miller

Break my first into a wall
Watch it crumble and fall
Look at all the people that
Never cared at all

They hide their souls within
These walls that are so thin
The only way they triumph is
To get under your skin

Can't seem to fade
everyone's betrayed me
Left me stranded by myself
in this world I call my Hell
Can't seem to find
What's on the other side
Of all this hatred that you've built up inside

Take this pain away from me
Your tired sympathy
Is not enough comfort for me to
Leave you be

Can't seem to fade
everyone's betrayed me
Left me stranded by myself
in this world I call my Hell
Can't seem to find
What's on the other side
Of all this hatred that you've built up inside

The world's so cold, the world's so still
Time moves so slow, this feels so unreal

They get their strides from hate
They kiss and seal your fate
They try to steal life from you
It's already too late

Can't seem to fade
everyone's betrayed me
Left me stranded by myself
in this world I call my Hell
Can't seem to find
What's on the other side
Of all this hatred that you've built up inside

The world's so cold, the world's so still
Time moves so slow, this feels so unreal...

If you read this, and are signed in... please give feedback.  I beg of you.

Criticize me dammit

I haven't exactly named this song yet, but it's somewhat about people that let authority go to their head.  I think what prompted this was the job I jsut quit from, and the way  the management treated their lower employees.  A lot of puppet motifs...  Oh well.   COMMENTS PLEASE
© by:  Jason Miller

I'm fading faster, I'm losing sight
I just can't make it through another night
My lifes unwinding right before my very eyes
It hits me just a second too late to realize

Your first impression, my last mistake
Your bullshit lies, everything's fake
I won't take this, I'll make or break this
You wont have me dangling from your string

So you tied me up, and you let me go
And you told me what to say as if I couldn't on my own
But my strings are breaking, and you're losing control
You thought you owned the world, but you were wrong all along

Your crazy antics, drive me insane
I'm sick of playing, the blame game
My sleepless nights, my endless days
My foggy future, your perfect haze

So you tied me up, and you let me go
And you told me what to say as if I couldn't on my own
But my strings are breaking, and you're losing control
You thought that you were strong, but your weakness is starting to show

Now you're left with nothing, thought you were something
Thought that the world revolved around you
But the cycle goes on, and it's finally dawned
Now someone else has their strings attached to you

I am in the process of writing an extremely long epic about experiencing the death of someone you love, but until that masterpiece is compelted and perfected, here's a beautifully depressing ditty by yours truly to hold you over.

"Our Last Sunrise"
© by: Jason Miller

Ever since the beginning of time
We all knew that it'd all unwind
We all knew that time would end
Nobody knew just how or when

We all feared that the end was in sight
Everybody thought that they were right
Differing ideas and thoughts
Much too little and all for not

Cause everybody thinks that they will be together
Everybody thinks that life goes on forever
Nobody knows what to do after they're gone
They just like to pretend life goes on and on..

Just before the sun does rise
Look up to the crimson skies
This is the last sunrise of our lives...
One last thing before we die
I'll try my best not to cry
Spending our last sunrise by each others side
Each others side....

FEEDBACK PEOPLE!  and im rather sick of getting only like 3 comments.  Anyone who reads this, criticize it anyway possible! Positive or negative!